Far far far far far too much detail.
Shoulder insignia used by military are there for quick recognition of regiment. Cavalry Airborne
What we have is a very nice design
which is just not fit for purpose. It's a fast moving space ninja game and we don't get the stationary time to admire the intricacies of your beautiful design.
I know there is a hardcore bunch of you who won't agree but something recognisable would surely be preferably to something so pretty.